ENGLISH 305 COURSE INFORMATION

As an online course, the writing that we do in English 305 is substantially different from a face to face course. As such, it is imperative that you understand the course style from the start. Nearly all of your work in this course will be posted on the course blog.
EACH WEEK YOU WILL HAVE THREE BLOG ASSIGNMENTS:
1. A BLOG ENTRY,
2. A READING, AND
3. A WRITING ABOUT THE READING. Your reading and writing on the blog must be completed by the Friday (by midnight) of the week in which the reading falls. You have all week each week to complete the reading and writing for that week, but there are no late assignments accepted, so be sure to be disciplined about the work from the start. Let me re-state that point; if you do the assigned work before or during the week it is due, you will receive full credit. If you do the work after the Friday of the week it is assigned, you will get zero credit for that week.

Saturday, March 3, 2012

TURNITIN.COM INFORMATION

The class ID is 4927779
The password is a secret. It is     english

TIPPING POINT REVISION INSTRUCTIONS

SCHMOLL/ENGLISH 305/ESSAY #3: Tipping Point:

There are two essay topics to choose from.

Write a 3 page double spaced essay on one of the following topics:
1. How might one or more of the ideas in the book The Tipping Point apply to your chosen academic major or profession?

2. Locate a trend [social, political, cultural, other] that is not in the book but seems to exhibit a "tipping point" phenomenon. Provide a brief explanation of why you think this phenomenon meets Gladwell's criteria for a tipping point phenomenon.


FOUR STEPS TO THIS PROJECT:

1. Rough Draft is due to your reviser and to me on March 13
               

            The person revising your paper is ___________________.

Email your paper to     ________________________            
     
                                                and to bschmoll@csub.edu

2. Revised Rough Draft due to the original author and me on March 16

3. Final Draft is due to me March 19

4. Final Draft is also due to Turnitin.com by the night of March 19



REMEMBER, THIS IS PEER REVISION (not editing)…

You are looking for coherence of the argument, paragraph coherence, logical reasoning in the essay, use of examples or quotes from the book. In essence, give this essay a critical, HIGHLY CRITICAL, set of eyes.


Monday, February 27, 2012

WEEK EIGHT BLOG ENTRY

Interpret this poem:

GREAT, GOOD, BAD

A great book is a homing device
For navigating paradise

A good book somehow makes you care
About the comfort of a chair.

A bad book owes to many trees
A forest of apologies.

J. Patrick Lewis, Please Bury Me in the Library

WEEK EIGHT READING

Jackie Robinson -- crossing the line
The man who broke Major League Baseball's color barrier never forgot the indignities of his first trip to spring training.



On Feb. 28, 1946, Jackie Robinson and his wife, Rachel, boarded an American Airlines flight in Los Angeles bound for Daytona Beach, Fla., for spring training. There he would try to prove that he was good enough to join the Montreal Royals, the top minor league team in the Brooklyn Dodgers' organization, and integrate professional baseball.

It would be more than a year before Robinson played his first game with Brooklyn, on April 15, 1947, breaking Major League Baseball's color line and forever changing baseball and society.

The story of the integration of baseball was perhaps the most important story involving racial equality in the years immediately following World War II. "Back in the days when integration wasn't fashionable," the Rev.Martin Luther King Jr. said of Robinson, "he underwent the trauma and humiliation and the loneliness which comes with being a pilgrim walking the lonesome byways toward the high road of freedom."

Never before — or since — had so much been riding on an athlete in surroundings so hostile as the Deep South in 1946, where racial discrimination was legal and brutally enforced, and where blacks who challenged it were jailed, beaten or lynched.

Robinson grew up in Pasadena and attended Pasadena Junior College before he transferred to UCLA. The former four-sport athlete at UCLA was keenly aware of the risks involved with challenging Jim Crow on its own soil. He also knew he was putting his wife's life in jeopardy by taking her on the trip to Florida. The couple had been married less than three weeks.

Unlike Rachel, who had never been in the South, Jackie had searing memories of what had happened to him a year and a half earlier at Ft. Hood, Texas. In July 1944, Robinson, then a lieutenant in the Army, was ordered to the back of a city bus, and refused. He didn't back down and when the bus returned to the military base, he was arrested and subsequently court-martialed for insubordination. Robinson was exonerated and then discharged from the Army in late 1944.

If Robinson had not been court-martialed, he probably would have remained with his battalion and been shipped to Europe, and Dodgers President Branch Rickey would have signed someone else. Instead, Robinson was playing for the Kansas City Monarchs in the Negro Leagues when Rickey was searching for the right player to integrate baseball. Rickey secretly signed Robinson to a contract in August 1945, after receiving the ballplayer's assurances that he would have "guts enough not to fight back" against racial epithets, spikings by cleats and worse, that no matter what came Robinson's way, he would restrain himself.

Two months later, the Montreal Royals announced it had signed Robinson. When black America learned about the signing, the things denied for so long suddenly seemed possible. Ludlow Werner, editor of the New York Age, a black weekly, wrote that Robinson "would be haunted by the expectations of his race.... White America will judge the Negro race by everything he does. And Lord help him with his fellow Negroes if he should fail them."

The racial climate in the United States at that time — especially in the South — was tense, unpredictable and violent. In return for fighting for their country in World War II, black veterans wanted racial equality when they returned home. Instead, many were killed to teach them their place.

A few days before the Robinsons left Los Angeles, racial tensions erupted in Columbia, Tenn. A black woman and her son, who had recently been discharged from the Navy, complained to a white merchant about a radio he was supposed to have repaired. The merchant slapped the woman. Her son then shoved the merchant through the store's plate-glass window. The next morning, hundreds of law enforcement officers and white townspeople converged on the town's black section, destroying homes, businesses and churches, and beating up and arresting black citizens. More than 100 blacks were jailed and two were shot to death while in custody.

The Robinsons flew through the night that February and landed in New Orleans. After a layover they were scheduled to fly to Pensacola, Fla., before going on to Daytona Beach. When the Robinsons lined up to board the plane for Pensacola, they were told they had been bumped. When they tried to get something to eat at a segregated restaurant in the airport, they were prohibited from entering.

Twelve hours after they had landed in New Orleans, the Robinsons boarded a flight to Pensacola. When they landed to refuel, a flight attendant asked them to exit the plane. Once the Robinsons were on the tarmac, they were told that bad weather was expected so the plane needed to add more fuel. To counter the weight of the additional fuel, three passengers — the Robinsons and a Mexican woman — had to be removed. As Robinson listened to the explanation, he saw white passengers board the plane. Robinson felt a growing sense of rage, but remembering Rickey's words, he choked back the anger.

Instead of waiting for the next plane, the Robinson took a Greyhound bus across the state to Daytona Beach. They relaxed in reclining seats at the front of the bus. When white passengers boarded the bus at the next stop, the driver pointed a finger at the Robinsons and ordered them to the back of the bus. He called Jackie "boy." Robinson, knowing that an incident of any kind might jeopardize what was called "baseball's great experiment," did as he was told.

Nearly 36 hours after the Robinsons left Los Angeles, the couple — hungry, tired and angry — arrived at the Daytona Beach bus station. They were met by Wendell Smith and Billy Rowe, journalists with the influential black weekly the Pittsburgh Courier.

"Well, I finally made it," Robinson snapped, "but I never want another trip like this one."

Robinson stayed up into the early hours of the morning bitterly recounting what he and his wife had been through, seething over what the Greyhound bus driver had called him. "He was very annoyed and hurt," Rowe later remembered. "He had been called a 'boy.' This man had become a 'boy.'"

Robinson told Smith and Rowe he did not think he could get a fair tryout in Florida and said he wanted to quit and return to the Negro Leagues. Smith and Rowe talked with him, explaining — as Rickey had — that it was important for him to suffer certain indignities so other blacks could follow him. "We tried to tell him what the whole thing meant, that it was something he had to do," Rowe said.

Chris Lamb, a professor of communication at the College of Charleston in South Carolina, is the author of the forthcoming book, "Conspiracy of Silence: Sportswriters and the Long Campaign to Desegregate Baseball." Email: lambc@cofc.edu

WEEK EIGHT WRITING ABOUT WHAT YOU READ

Is there someone today who seems similar to Robinson? What is the importance of Robinson's story?

Sunday, February 19, 2012

WEEK SEVEN BLOG ENTRY

If you could have a drink with anyone from all of history, who would it be and why? (and what would you be drinking?)

WEEK SEVEN READING

NEIL POSTMAN, AMUSING OURSELVES TO DEATH

There are two parts to this reading. The first is the foreward to the book:
We were keeping our eye on 1984. When the year came and the prophecy didn't, thoughtful Americans sang softly in praise of themselves. The roots of liberal democracy had held. Wherever else the terror had happened, we, at least, had not been visited by Orwellian nightmares.
But we had forgotten that alongside Orwell's dark vision, there was another - slightly older, slightly less well known, equally chilling: Aldous Huxley's Brave New World. Contrary to common belief even among the educated, Huxley and Orwell did not prophesy the same thing. Orwell warns that we will be overcome by an externally imposed oppression. But in Huxley's vision, no Big Brother is required to deprive people of their autonomy, maturity and history. As he saw it, people will come to love their oppression, to adore the technologies that undo their capacities to think.
What Orwell feared were those who would ban books. What Huxley feared was that there would be no reason to ban a book, for there would be no one who wanted to read one. Orwell feared those who would deprive us of information. Huxley feared those who would give us so much that we would be reduced to passivity and egoism. Orwell feared that the truth would be concealed from us. Huxley feared the truth would be drowned in a sea of irrelevance. Orwell feared we would become a captive culture. Huxley feared we would become a trivial culture, preoccupied with some equivalent of the feelies, the orgy porgy, and the centrifugal bumblepuppy. As Huxley remarked in Brave New World Revisited, the civil libertarians and rationalists who are ever on the alert to oppose tyranny "failed to take into account man's almost infinite appetite for distractions". In 1984, Huxley added, people are controlled by inflicting pain. In Brave New World, they are controlled by inflicting pleasure. In short, Orwell feared that what we hate will ruin us. Huxley feared that what we love will ruin us.
This book is about the possibility that Huxley, not Orwell, was right.

Here's the second part of the reading. It's a piece of a chapter:

How often does it occur that information provided you on morning radio
or television, or in the morning newspaper, causes you to alter your
plans for the day, or to take some action you would not otherwise have
taken, or provides insight into some problem you are required to solve?
For most of us, news of the weather will sometimes have such
consequences; for investors, news of the stock market; perhaps an
occasional story about a crime will do it, if by chance the crime
occurred near where you live or involved someone you know. But most of
our daily news is inert, consisting of information that gives us
something to talk about but cannot lead to any meaningful action. This
fact is the principal legacy of the telegraph: By generating an
abundance of irrelevant information, it dramatically altered what may be
called the "information-action ratio."
In both oral and typographic cultures, information derives its
importance from the possibilities of action. Of course, in any
communication environment, input (what one is informed about) always
exceeds output (the possibilities of action based on information). But
the situation created by telegraphy, and then exacerbated by later
technologies, made the relationship between information and action both
abstract and remote. For the first time in human history, people were
faced with the problem of information glut, which means that
simultaneously they were faced with the problem of a diminished social
and political potency.
You may get a sense of what this means by asking yourself another series
of questions: What steps do you plan to take to reduce the conflict in
the Middle East? Or the rates of inflation, crime and unemployment?
What are your plans for preserving the environment or reducing the risk
of nuclear war? What do you plan to do about NATO, OPEC, the CIA,
affirmative action, and the monstrous treatment of the Baha'is in Iran?
I shall take
the liberty of answering for you: You plan to do nothing about them. You
may, of course, cast a ballot for someone who claims to have some plans,
as well as the power to act. But this you can do only once every two or
four years by giving one hour of your time, hardly a satisfying means of
expressing the broad range of opinions you hold. Voting, we might even
say, is the next to last refuge of the politically impotent. the last
refuge is, of course, giving your opinion to a pollster, who will get a
version of it through a desiccated question, and then will submerge it
in a Niagara of similar opinions, and convert them into--what
else?--another piece of news. Thus, we have here a great loop of
impotence: the news elicits from you a variety of opinions about which
you can do nothing except to offer them as more news, about which you
can do nothing.
Prior to the age of telegraphy, the information-action ratio was
sufficiently close so that most people had a sense of being able to
control some of the contingencies in their lives. What people knew
about had action-value. In the information world created by telegraphy,
this sense of potency was lost, precisely because the whole world became
the context for news. Everything became everyone's business. For the
first time, we were sent information which answered no question we had
asked, and which, in any case, did not permit the right of reply.
We may say then that the contribution of the telegraph to public
discourse was to dignify irrelevance and amplify impotence. But this was
not all: Telegraphy also made public discourse essentially incoherent.
It brought into being a world of broken time and broken attention, to
use Lewis Mumford's phrase. the principal strength of the telegraph was
its capacity to move information, not collect it, explain it or analyze
it. In this respect, telegraphy was the exact opposite of typography.
books, for example, are an excellent container for the accumulation,
quiet scrutiny and organized analysis of information and ideas.

WEEK SEVEN WRITING ABOUT WHAT YOU READ

In general, this week you should write your Tech essay. But here's something to think about also: are POstman's ideas still valid and relevant?

Monday, February 13, 2012

WEEK SIX BLOG ENTRY

Think about something you are good at doing...it could be anything from throwing a baseball to cooking flan...anything! Discuss the process you went through to learn to do that. Did you learn to do this thing on your own, with moderate or occasional assistance, or with a great deal of support?

WEEK SIX READING...WELL, SORT OF READING

Okay, so here's a weird one. For this week's reading you are going to watch a video. If yuo have trouble getting the video to play, maybe try a different computer, if that's possible. Usually, these ted.com videos are pretty easy to use, so if you have trouble be sure to let me know and we'll try to work it out. Enjoy!

http://www.ted.com/talks/sugata_mitra_shows_how_kids_teach_themselves.html

If, by chance, the above link does not work, simply type into google, "ted.com, kids teach themselves." That should work.

WEEK SIX RESPONDING TO WHAT YOU READ

So, this week's reading was odd, but I hope you enjoyed it. Tell me, do you believe that this is true? Can children teach themselves? If so, what are the limits of that belief? If we put a group of 10 year olds in a room full of calculus textbooks will they eventually learn calculus? Use any other examples to make a case for what you believe to be true.

Saturday, February 4, 2012

ESSAY 2 DETAILS

ESSAY #2: Tech Essay: Consider the readings on the blog that have dealt with technology. In your opinion, have recent technologies been good or bad for people? Use specific examples and references to the readings or to other readings you find on this subject. This essay is double-spaced and about 2 pages.
At only two pages or so, it's more of a reflection than a complete essay with intro, body, and conclusion. You may use the first person.

Be sure to completely ignore the comments I made on your restaurant reviews while you write these papers.
BUT THEN, as you edit and revise the essay, take them very seriously. The point is, don;t let them stop you from creating a first draft. After that draft is done, revise, rethink, re-read, edit, edit, and then edit.

The original due date was March 10, but that was incorrect.

This essay must be emailed to me as an attachment by February 24th. I will print them out, comment on them, and hand them back at our meeting on March 3rd.

WEEK FIVE BLOG ENTRY

Everyone seemed to enjoy writing the restaurant reviews. I can truly say that I enjoyed reading and responding to them...honestly, enjoyed it. Why is it that some types of writing are easier and more enjoyable to read and write while others feel like such a chore?

If you are able, brainstorm some other types of assignments that might be similar to the restaurant review...

WEEK FIVE READING: TWO ARTICLES

ARTICLE 1: FROM  http://blogs.lawyers.com
Distracted Walking Injuries on the Rise
January 24, 2012 By Aaron Kase
Your parents probably taught you to look both ways before crossing the street. But the growing proliferation of cell phones and other handheld electronic devices means that more and more people are looking in neither direction when they step out in traffic, and wearing headphones only increases the sensory deprivation.
Distracted walkers have an annoying habit of getting in the way of traffic or other pedestrians, but worse, a new
study finds, sometimes they end up in the hospital—or dead.
  Study finds 116 deaths or injuries from headphone-abetted collisions
  Liability unclear in distracted walking cases
  No state laws exist regulating walking while phoning
Death by Headphone
A recently released study by the Injury Prevention publication, part of the British Medical Journal, found that 116 people have been killed or
injured in the United States since 2004 in collisions between people
wearing headphones and vehicles—cars, and, even more frequently,
trains. In nearly a third of the cases studied, the vehicle sounded a
warning, which went unheeded, presumably because headphones were blocking out outside noise. Over two thirds of victims were males and under the age of 30.
The Injury Prevention study isn’t the first time distracted walking has been the subject of inquiry. A New York
Times story from 2010 found that over 1,000 patients visited emergency rooms in 2008 after injuring themselves while walking and phoning, a number that had doubled each of the previous two years. With the rise of smart phones, that figure is likely to have increased again since 2008.
The Times lists some examples that might be considered humorous, as long as you aren’t the injured party:
“Examples of such visits include a 16-year-old boy who walked into a telephone pole while texting and suffered
a concussion; a 28-year-old man who tripped and fractured a finger on the hand gripping his cellphone; and a
68-year-old man who fell off the porch while talking on a cellphone, spraining a thumb and an ankle and causing
dizziness.”
The most famous distracted walking case to date occurred last January, when YouTube hero Cathy Cruz
Marrero was caught on camera toppling into a mall fountain while sending a text message. Marrero considered suing the mall after her accident, until reports of her long history of retail theft came to light and she quickly ducked out of the spotlight.
Who Can I Sue?
“It’s remarkable to me that people will jaywalk at an angle with their back to traffic, with headphones on or
texting away,” says David White, a partner at Massachusetts personal injury and medical malpractice firm Breakstone, White & Gluck. “The burden on drivers is tremendous to avoid accidents with people like that. I wish
people would be a little more careful.”
The potential dangers were illustrated in a 2009 Western Washington University
study, in which only 25 percent of people using a phone while walking across campus
noticed a man wearing a “purple-and-yellow clown costume with polka dot sleeves,
red shoes and bulbous red nose” riding around on a unicycle. If you are so engaged in
a phone call to not notice a clown on a unicycle, how are you going to be aware of
such an everyday sight as a car in the street, even if it’s bearing down on you at high
speeds?
If an accident victim were to sue in such a case, the driver might be able to sway a
jury to consider the role of device usage by the pedestrian, says White. “The analysis
is the same as it would be in any kind of accident— you start with the negligence of
the defendant driver, who would compare the comparative negligence on the part of the pedestrian,” the
attorney says. Since there aren’t any laws prohibiting headphone or mobile use while walking, the defense wouldn’t be able to get a statutory leg up, but scientific studies like the one noted above could help the case. There’s also the common sense factor. “Just take ordinary analysis,” White says, “You could not have been paying too much attention where you’re going.”
Against the Law?
While distracted driving laws have been proliferating around the country the last five years, no states have yet
passed similar laws for pedestrians. Last year New York and Arkansas considered regulating use of electronic
devices and headphones while walking, though neither effort was successful. New York State Sen. Carl Kruger, a leading evangelical of distracted walking laws who has tried since 2007 to ban pedestrians from using electronic devices while crossing the street in major cities, expounds on his views in this WRGB Albany interview.
There was also a brief Internet uproar last summer after a false report that
Philadelphia was going to start handing out citations for texting while walking (“There is no policy, plan or activity in Philadelphia where pedestrians are being ticketed for texting,” Philadelphia Mayor Michael Nutter’s press secretary responded to a Gawker story. “Your whack job reporter . . . needs to get his facts straight.”).
Aside from anti-jaywalking ordinances in some cities, there are few laws
governing the behavior of pedestrians at all, and White doesn’t see walking
while phoning laws becoming a reality anytime in the near future. “It will be a
while before legislators start to pick up the pen and legislate distracted
walking,” he says. “They will be perceived as meddling a little too much, even though it makes perfectly good public health sense.”

 ARTICLE 2:
Is technology helping disability?
Suffering from "locked-in syndrome", Jeff Hall communicates with the world using just one finger.
The former TV engineer from San Antonio, Texas was paralyzed by a stroke when he was 40 years old and left with only limited movement including some control of his head, arms and legs.
With the help of technology he can live independently and has recovered some of the freedom he lost seven years ago.
He talks using a text to speech synthesizer called Ghost Reader and with the aid of an Apple computer and an Android phone he can pay bills, text friends and send emails.
"Thanks to those, the entire world has opened up for me," he says.
There is a certain amount of friction between open source like Android and accessibility
Robin Christopherson, AbilityNet
Seven years ago this enabling equipment was limited and expensive. The kit that helped Jeff to speak cost $10,000 (£6,000).
But today he is able to use the same common gadgets as other people.
"One of the beauties of mainstream devices is that they have hundreds of peripherals that you can just add on," says Robin Christopherson from AbilityNet, a British organisation that promotes accessibility in technology.
"In a specialist device, adding in say, Bluetooth connectivity will add another $100 (£60) to the price."
She says the main reason people like Jeff now feel comfortable with off-the-shelf technology is the way that operating systems are designed.
Disabled designers
Many of the major technology firms now involve the disabled community in development.
Jason Grieves is visually impaired and leads the Windows 7 accessibility team at Microsoft.
"In Windows 7 we were able to provide a Beta out and this allowed customers with disabilities to provide us with feedback.
"They were able to send us emails and send us tools that they wanted to see incorporated into the operating system," he says.
The critical thing, according to Hall, is how well these systems can be adapted for use with applications created by third party developers for disabled users.
It is these pieces of software that allow Jeff Hall to freely interact with the world. He uses them for everything from speaking to controlling the lights in his home.
But there is a contradiction here.
While leaving software open to manipulation can benefit disabled users, it also means that software systems evolve outside of the control of the big technology firms.
"Free for all"
This could disadvantage disabled users as accessibility may be overlooked when no one firm or group of firms is held responsible for ensuring it.
"There is a certain amount of friction between open source like Android and accessibility," says Robin Christopherson.
"It is one of these strange situations where a closed environment like the IOS (Apple's operating system) actually lends itself far more to make sure that accessibility is catered for.
"It's pretty much a free for all in the Android environment and because it's a disparate community working on open source software, the first thing that goes out the window is accessibility."
But surely technology cannot go backwards?
Jeff Hall worries that as systems develop, they could start to alienate disabled people.
Innovations such as multi-gesture controls - two-finger scrolling on the iPad and iPhone, or the use of a Microsoft Kinect, are impossible for people in his position.
Multi-gesture is in itself a small thing but he fears it could be a harbinger of worse to come.
People like Jeff are relatively few in number and, in his case, are literally voiceless.
He is calling for tech giants to continue to maintain awareness of users like him and of the way in which technological marvels can transform their lives, for better and for worse.

WEEK FIVE RESPONDING TO WHAT YOU READ

Which of the two articles was more compelling and why?

Sunday, January 29, 2012

WEEK FOUR BLOG ENTRY

Is censorship ever acceptable and good?

WEEK FOUR READING...For this week, read the piece below AND find one other article on censorship of any kind.

Google stops censoring in China Google has stopped censoring its search results in China, ignoring warnings by the country's authorities.
The US company said its Chinese users would be redirected to the uncensored pages of its Hong Kong website.
In January, Google had complained about a "sophisticated cyber attack originating from China".
China accused Google of violating a "written promise" it made when entering the market to abide by laws requiring it to filter its search service.
A Chinese official was quoted by the state-run Xinhua news agency as saying Google's decision to ignore the promise regarding its Chinese-language search portal Google.cn was "totally wrong".
The White House said it was dismayed that Google and China had not been able to resolve their differences.
US National Security spokesman Mike Hammer said: "We are disappointed that Google and the Chinese government were unable to reach an agreement that would allow Google to continue operating its search services in China on its Google.cn website."
Chinese government officials had warned Google repeatedly that it would face consequences if it did not comply with the country's censorship rules.
In a blog post, the company said the Chinese government had been "crystal clear throughout our discussions that self-censorship is a non-negotiable legal requirement".
Slowdowns
Google's chief legal officer, David Drummond, said that providing "uncensored search" from Google.com.hk was "a sensible solution to the challenges we've faced - it's entirely legal and will meaningfully increase access to information for people in China".
It said there might be some service slowdowns and delays in getting search results while it beefs up resources to handle the re-directed queries.
"We very much hope that the Chinese government respects our decision, though we are well aware that it could at any time block access to our services," Mr Drummond wrote in the blog post.
He added that Google would carefully monitor access and provide regular updates via a dedicated page to show what was available via its services in mainland China.
One cause of the row was Google's revelation on 12 January that it - and more than 20 other companies - had been the victim of a cyber attack that originated inside China.
During the attack Google lost some intellectual property and discovered that the attack was aimed at the GMail accounts of human rights activists. This attack led Google to "review the feasibility" of its Chinese operations.
In the blog entry posted on 22 March, Google said it would maintain an R&D and sales presence in China.
It said the size of its sales team would depend on how many Chinese people can get at the Hong Kong-based site. Currently about 700 of Google's 20,000 strong workforce are based in China.
Opportunity cost
On Sunday, state media in China had attacked Google for what they described as the company's "intricate ties" with the US government.
Google provided US intelligence agencies with a record of its search engine results, Xinhua said.
While Google is the world's most popular search engine, it is a distant number two in the Chinese market, which is dominated by Baidu.
However, because of the size and growth rate of China's internet population, any loss of business there is likely to harm Google's future growth prospects.
Analysts said that initially Google's prospects would not be dented by shutting down Google.cn as it is responsible, at most, for 2% of its annual $24bn (£15.9bn) revenue.
"Near-term, not that big a deal," said Tim Ghriskey, chief investment officer at Solaris Asset Management. "Long-term, if this stays in place, it's a negative. China is certainly a great growth opportunity."
China operates one of the most sophisticated and wide-reaching censorship systems in the world.
Thousands of police officers are employed to monitor web activity and many automated systems watch blogs, chat rooms and other sites to ensure that banned subjects, such as Tiananmen Square, are not discussed.

WEEK FOUR RESPONDING TO WHAT YOU READ

What's the key line in this essay and why does that one stand out to you?

For the other article that you found, what can you tell us about it? Would you recommend it? What else does that article add to the conversation?

Sunday, January 22, 2012

WEEK THREE BLOG ENTRY

What is your most enduring memory from a restaurant? Maybe someone proposed to you, broke up with you, or you did either of those things. Perhaps you ate with a famous person. I once had lunch with Nicholas Cage in a restaurant on Melrose Ave.Well, not "with" him but at another table. I wonder if he still tells his friends about it. Did you ever eat somewhere with menu sticker shock? $34 for french fries? Did you ever eat somewhere so delicious that just one bite changed your life? Tell us your most enduring restaurant memory.

WEEK THREE READING

For fun, here's a site with some suggestions for how to write a good restaurant review:
http://www.menuism.com/blog/5-tips-towards-writing-a-great-restaurant-review/

And here's the actual reading for this week:

The Find: Taco MarĂ­a truck survives the downturn

Chef Carlos Salgado's mobile restaurant specializes in food that re-imagines tantalizing Mexican traditions.


When food truck fatigue finally set in among the Twitter-equipped some time last year, the mobile movement all but stalled. Gone were the throngs that waited for hours, their attentions shifted instead to newly minted food artisans and itinerant pop-up restaurants. But in a Darwinian twist, only the strongest trucks have survived. And though the thrill of the chase may be gone for some, what remains are by and large the best meals on wheels.

Taco María is a product of that natural selection. The truck is helmed by Carlos Salgado, whose culinary pedigree instantly drove Taco María onto the radar screen of every serious Orange County eater. His has indeed an impressive résumé: Salgado served as pastry chef in some of the Bay Area's top restaurants, including Daniel Patterson's Coi and Oakland's Commis. He returned home to Orange County to help his parents transform the family's taquería. Taco María is what emerged from that reinvention, a truck that's constantly re-imagining lonchera traditions with the techniques and style of Mexican alta cocina.

"My parents' restaurant, La Siesta [in Orange], has been in business for over 25 years," Salgado says. "It was when they started talking about selling a few years ago that I began pointing myself back toward my hometown. Taco MarĂ­a was to be an extension of the restaurant and a flagship for our catering operations.

"Coming to work for a different audience, at a different price point, I've had to simplify my approach and distill the cooking ethics that are most important to me into a method that works within the food truck model. And while I may not have a kitchen full of highly trained, Michelin-quality cooks, a Pacojet, Cryovac machine or a dozen immersion circulators, I do have my family to support me and keep me grounded. My dad is the best sous-chef I could imagine having."

Those at the truck inevitably start with the aracherra taco, made with grilled hanger steak, a blistered shisito pepper, caramelized onion and bacon's smoky quintessence. The taco has both the humble charm of a backyard barbecue and the finesse of a fine steakhouse.

Yet even the most hard-core carnivores ultimately end up ordering the jardineros taco as well: knobs of roasted pumpkin, black beans, cotija cheese and a pumpkin seed salsa de semillas. There's no need for meat — this is a vegetarian taco built not on the artifice of mock meat or incongruous fusion but on the simple rhythms of the market.

If the aracherra doesn't sway you, there's always the carnitas. The slow-cooked pork shoulder is lashed with a bit of citrus and enlivened by the noticeable warmth of cinnamon. The mole de pollo is even more richly spiced — the mahogany mole is as complex as an Indian curry.

But Taco María's ever-changing specials are its signature. The truck's quesadilla de tuétano triggers Pavlovian devotion. It's a dish already cemented in food truck lore: crisp nuggets of bone marrow, stringy queso Oaxaca and a garlic-and-herb paste pulverized in a molcajete. It's predictably rich but powerfully addictive.

Salgado's rendition of esquites is similarly good, chile- and lime-laced corn sautéed with garlic, thyme and epazote in a butter flavored with blackened corncobs and toasty husks.

"I was telling [my] mom about some of my favorite foods and struggling to find a translation for bone marrow," Salgado explains. "She said something like, 'I think we used to make quesadillas [with that].' I was floored and immediately wrote it into our opening menu. What I assumed would be a fringe dish for the adventurous actually turned out to be incredibly popular. My whole staff has cuts and scrapes on their hands from pushing marrow every day just to meet demand."

It isn't brunch without the truck's excellent chilaquiles: freshly fried tortilla chips enrobed in a cascabel chile sauce and topped with pickled onions, queso fresco and a fried egg. Taco MarĂ­a isn't all about masa, either — any taco can be turned into a burrito. And you've really got to try the beet salad dressed with avocado, orange, almonds and charred scallion vinaigrette.

There may be a melon-lemon grass agua fresca to drink, or perhaps one flush with hibiscus and Concord grape. Salgado's almond horchata, however, is what you'll want a jug of, almond milk perfumed with coriander seeds. It's a brilliant addition: fragrant and floral, the coriander is at once unmistakable and ingeniously subtle.

Whether it's by an obsessive need for completion or sheer force of will, you will find room for dessert. Salgado's sweets are every bit as good as his pastry training portends, like the steamed chocolate bread pudding strewn with fried peanuts and glazed with milky caramel. When there isn't dense rice pudding scented with star anise and cinnamon, there's a glorious ricotta flan of homemade ricotta, caramel and a few sangria-soaked raspberries.

Witness the truck's crowds at Orange County's farmers markets and business parks and you begin to understand Taco MarĂ­a's growing cult, a purveyor of precisely the kind of modern Mexican cooking that's destined not for disposable cardboard containers but fine porcelain.

Salgado hints at that future. "It's still too early for us to share details, but we're excited about creating a unique type of Mexican restaurant here in Orange County, where Mexican food is such a large part of our shared experience. Exactly where and when depend on how far our truck, Frida, can take us. What I can say is that the restaurant will remain local, honest and accessible, with a menu that is recognizably Mexican in soul, in a space that is central, warm and inviting and will hopefully become a fixture in our own community."

source: http://www.latimes.com/features/food/la-fo-find-20120119,0,3934262.story

WEEK THREE RESPONDING TO WHAT YOU READ

For this week, you have to write the restaurant review, so nothing else is due here. You already have the assignment on the blog. Email if you have questions.

Sunday, January 15, 2012

COURSE SYLLABUS

English 305 Syllabus
The majority of this course consists of what you have already begun to do: reading and writing critically online. In addition, you will have the opportunity to craft three short essays. I am enclosing the department policies below. I will also include our overall schedule for the quarter.
Graded Assignments:
ESSAY #1: Restaurant Review:RESTAURANT REVIEW: (20%)
Go to any restaurant in town. As you eat, take notes on the ambiance, the food, and the service. You may choose any restaurant (from Taco Bell to Café Med), but you should use this writing assignment to explore your descriptive capabilities. Use sound, touch, taste, smell, and the look of the food and surroundings. The review should be approximately two pages in length, BUT YOU MAY CHOOSE TO WRITE MORE THAN THAT. You may use the first-person in this review. Remember, I am looking for descriptive depth, so dig deeply into the describing.

This assignment must be emailed to me as an attachment by Friday, Jan 27

ESSAY #2: Tech Essay: Consider the reading from weeks two, three, and four. In your opinion, have recent technologies been good or bad for people? Use specific examples and references to the readings or to other readings you find on this subject. This essay is 2-3 pages, double-spaced. Final draft must be emailed to me as an attachment by Friday, March 10.
ESSAY #3: Tipping Point: For this assignment, you will email me the final draft copy of your essay. You will also email a rough draft to your revisers. I will send information about who you will be emailing.
The essay should be attached as a Microsoft Word document and should be 3-4 pages in length, double spaced.
There are two essay topics to choose from.
Write a 3-4 page double spaced essay on one of the following topics:
1. How might one or more of the ideas in the book The Tipping Point apply to your chosen profession?
2. Locate a trend [social, political, cultural, other] that seems to exhibit a "tipping point" phenomenon. Provide a brief explanation of why you think this phenomenon meets Gladwell's criteria for a tipping point phenomenon.
Rough Draft is due March 9
Final Draft is due March 16
ESSAY #4: In-Class Essay,  March 3rd from 9-11 in Classroom Building 101
GRADING SCALE:
Weekly Blog Entries: 10%
Writing About the Reading: 10%
Restaurant Review: 20% (essay 1)
Online Thinking Essay: 10% (essay 2)
Tipping Point Rough Draft: 5%
Tipping Point Essay Final Draft: 25% (essay 3)
In Class Essay: 10% (essay 4)
Peer Revision: 10%
English 305:  Modes of Writing
Prerequisite:  A grade of B or higher in English 110 or its equivalent, Internet skills, word-processing skills, and upper-division standing (90 quarter units)

To Satisfy the GWAR Requirement
Students must earn a grade of C or higher in this course to satisfy the Graduation Writing Assessment Requirement (GWAR).  In addition, this course can fulfill the GWAR only if a student has completed 90 or more quarter units of college work before taking it.
Successful Completion of English 305
To be eligible for a C in English 305, students must earn a C or higher on at least one in-class writing assignment and a C average on all other course assignments.  Since this is an online class, in-class writing assignments may be given at the first meeting, the last meeting, or both meetings.
Course Description
An online course in effective expository writing.  Emphasis on writing as a process.  This course counts toward the Teacher Preparation Programs in Liberal Studies and Child Development but does not count toward the major or minor.  Fulfills the GWAR. 
Course Learning Outcomes
Students in GWAR courses should advance their mastery of the following learning outcomes:
Goal 1:  Reading Skills
Objective 1:     Analyze a rhetorical situation (purpose, audience, tone) and how a writer’s rhetorical choices (e.g. bias, rhetorical modes, syntax, diction) inform a text.
Objective 2:     Analyze a text’s structure and conventional parts (introduction, thesis, main ideas, body paragraphs, conclusion), and how the parts work together.
Objective 3:                 Analyze a text’s logic and reasoning.
Objective 4:                 Effectively critique the effectiveness of a writer’s rhetorical choices, organization, and logic.

Goal 2:  Writing Skills
            Objective 1:     Effectively adapt the writing process to various rhetorical situations, anticipating the needs of purpose and audience.
            Objective 2:                 Analyze more complex and/or abstract writing prompts, and stay on task.
            Objective 3:     Create effective thesis statements, and use a variety of appropriate and compelling rhetorical strategies to support the thesis.
            Objective 4:                 Effectively structure essays, evaluating how the parts work together to create meaning.
            Objective 5:                 Avoid logical fallacies, and use precise logical reasoning to develop essays.
            Objective 6:                 Use correct and college-level, discourse-appropriate syntax, diction, grammar, and mechanics.
Goal 3:  Research Skills
            Objective 1:     Effectively use summary, paraphrase, and direct quotes to smoothly synthesize sources into own writing.
            Objective 2:                 Master a documentation style, and avoid plagiarism.          
            Objective 3:                 Use research methods to find reputable sources.
Individual, Drop-in Tutoring Requirement
Instructors may also require you to complete individual, drop-in tutoring for certain aspects of your writing, in which case you will receive a Tutor Referral Form with your graded essay.  If you receive a referral form with a paper, you are required within one week to take the form and the paper to the Writing Resource Center for individual assistance.  Instructors may withhold your essay grade until after you have completed this requirement.
Turnitin.com Requirement
Turnitin.com is a tool to help you avoid plagiarism.  Approximately two hours after submitting a paper to this online program, you can access a color-coded report with details about the use of sources in your paper.  Because this site does not detect problems with paraphrasing that is not cited properly, you should use this site only as a guide.  To use turnitin.com, you will need to register on the site and set up a password.  Once this is done, you then will need to create a “user profile” specifically for this class and any others that may use the site.  You will need the following information to set up your user profile:
Class ID—###
Class Enrollment Password—XXXX
After creating a profile, students can log onto and use the site.
Note:  Submitting a paper to turnitin.com is not the same as submitting a paper to your instructor; you also must hand in a copy of your paper to your instructor.
Revision Policy 
Required revisions are indicated on the course schedule. When you revise your writing, the original essay must be attached to the rewrite.  In order for a grade to improve, you need to do more than simply correct the marks on the original essay.  In other words, rewritten papers should show extensive revision as well as editing.  The final grade will be an average of the original and the rewritten essay.
Academic Honesty Policy
This course is subject to the academic and disciplinary sanctions established by CSUB for plagiarism as outlined on the university website: www.csub.edu, Acad. Info & Policies Fall 2011, p. 39.

Saturday, January 14, 2012

WEEK TWO BLOG ENTRY

How is your life different because of new technologies? How much energy do you expend checking email, texting, or playing games? Try to add up some of the time you spend each day online, on the phone, or texting.
As you write, try to avoid any judgemental or reflective comments. After your initial writing, you can think about what it means, but at first, just try to capture a sense of how much time is spent, devoid of judgement.

WEEK TWO READING

Is Google Making Us Stupid?

What the Internet is doing to our brains
By Nicholas Carr
"Dave, stop. Stop, will you? Stop, Dave. Will you stop, Dave?” So the supercomputer HAL pleads with the implacable astronaut Dave Bowman in a famous and weirdly poignant scene toward the end of Stanley Kubrick’s 2001: A Space Odyssey. Bowman, having nearly been sent to a deep-space death by the malfunctioning machine, is calmly, coldly disconnecting the memory circuits that control its artificial “ brain. “Dave, my mind is going,” HAL says, forlornly. “I can feel it. I can feel it.”
I can feel it, too. Over the past few years I’ve had an uncomfortable sense that someone, or something, has been tinkering with my brain, remapping the neural circuitry, reprogramming the memory. My mind isn’t going—so far as I can tell—but it’s changing. I’m not thinking the way I used to think. I can feel it most strongly when I’m reading. Immersing myself in a book or a lengthy article used to be easy. My mind would get caught up in the narrative or the turns of the argument, and I’d spend hours strolling through long stretches of prose. That’s rarely the case anymore. Now my concentration often starts to drift after two or three pages. I get fidgety, lose the thread, begin looking for something else to do. I feel as if I’m always dragging my wayward brain back to the text. The deep reading that used to come naturally has become a struggle.
I think I know what’s going on. For more than a decade now, I’ve been spending a lot of time online, searching and surfing and sometimes adding to the great databases of the Internet. The Web has been a godsend to me as a writer. Research that once required days in the stacks or periodical rooms of libraries can now be done in minutes. A few Google searches, some quick clicks on hyperlinks, and I’ve got the telltale fact or pithy quote I was after. Even when I’m not working, I’m as likely as not to be foraging in the Web’s info-thickets’reading and writing e-mails, scanning headlines and blog posts, watching videos and listening to podcasts, or just tripping from link to link to link. (Unlike footnotes, to which they’re sometimes likened, hyperlinks don’t merely point to related works; they propel you toward them.)
For me, as for others, the Net is becoming a universal medium, the conduit for most of the information that flows through my eyes and ears and into my mind. The advantages of having immediate access to such an incredibly rich store of information are many, and they’ve been widely described and duly applauded. “The perfect recall of silicon memory,” Wired’s Clive Thompson has written, “can be an enormous boon to thinking.” But that boon comes at a price. As the media theorist Marshall McLuhan pointed out in the 1960s, media are not just passive channels of information. They supply the stuff of thought, but they also shape the process of thought. And what the Net seems to be doing is chipping away my capacity for concentration and contemplation. My mind now expects to take in information the way the Net distributes it: in a swiftly moving stream of particles. Once I was a scuba diver in the sea of words. Now I zip along the surface like a guy on a Jet Ski.
I’m not the only one. When I mention my troubles with reading to friends and acquaintances—literary types, most of them—many say they’re having similar experiences. The more they use the Web, the more they have to fight to stay focused on long pieces of writing. Some of the bloggers I follow have also begun mentioning the phenomenon. Scott Karp, who writes a blog about online media, recently confessed that he has stopped reading books altogether. “I was a lit major in college, and used to be [a] voracious book reader,” he wrote. “What happened?” He speculates on the answer: “What if I do all my reading on the web not so much because the way I read has changed, i.e. I’m just seeking convenience, but because the way I THINK has changed?”
Bruce Friedman, who blogs regularly about the use of computers in medicine, also has described how the Internet has altered his mental habits. “I now have almost totally lost the ability to read and absorb a longish article on the web or in print,” he wrote earlier this year. A pathologist who has long been on the faculty of the University of Michigan Medical School, Friedman elaborated on his comment in a telephone conversation with me. His thinking, he said, has taken on a “staccato” quality, reflecting the way he quickly scans short passages of text from many sources online. “I can’t read War and Peace  anymore,” he admitted. “I’ve lost the ability to do that. Even a blog post of more than three or four paragraphs is too much to absorb. I skim it.”
Anecdotes alone don’t prove much. And we still await the long-term neurological and psychological experiments that will provide a definitive picture of how Internet use affects cognition. But a recently published study of online research habits , conducted by scholars from University College London, suggests that we may well be in the midst of a sea change in the way we read and think. As part of the five-year research program, the scholars examined computer logs documenting the behavior of visitors to two popular research sites, one operated by the British Library and one by a U.K. educational consortium, that provide access to journal articles, e-books, and other sources of written information. They found that people using the sites exhibited “a form of skimming activity,” hopping from one source to another and rarely returning to any source they’d already visited. They typically read no more than one or two pages of an article or book before they would “bounce” out to another site. Sometimes they’d save a long article, but there’s no evidence that they ever went back and actually read it. The authors of the study report:

It is clear that users are not reading online in the traditional sense; indeed there are signs that new forms of “reading” are emerging as users “power browse” horizontally through titles, contents pages and abstracts going for quick wins. It almost seems that they go online to avoid reading in the traditional sense.

Thanks to the ubiquity of text on the Internet, not to mention the popularity of text-messaging on cell phones, we may well be reading more today than we did in the 1970s or 1980s, when television was our medium of choice. But it’s a different kind of reading, and behind it lies a different kind of thinking—perhaps even a new sense of the self. “We are not only what we read,” says Maryanne Wolf, a developmental psychologist at Tufts University and the author of Proust and the Squid: The Story and Science of the Reading Brain. “We are how we read.” Wolf worries that the style of reading promoted by the Net, a style that puts “efficiency” and “immediacy” above all else, may be weakening our capacity for the kind of deep reading that emerged when an earlier technology, the printing press, made long and complex works of prose commonplace. When we read online, she says, we tend to become “mere decoders of information.” Our ability to interpret text, to make the rich mental connections that form when we read deeply and without distraction, remains largely disengaged.
Reading, explains Wolf, is not an instinctive skill for human beings. It’s not etched into our genes the way speech is. We have to teach our minds how to translate the symbolic characters we see into the language we understand. And the media or other technologies we use in learning and practicing the craft of reading play an important part in shaping the neural circuits inside our brains. Experiments demonstrate that readers of ideograms, such as the Chinese, develop a mental circuitry for reading that is very different from the circuitry found in those of us whose written language employs an alphabet. The variations extend across many regions of the brain, including those that govern such essential cognitive functions as memory and the interpretation of visual and auditory stimuli. We can expect as well that the circuits woven by our use of the Net will be different from those woven by our reading of books and other printed works.
Sometime in 1882, Friedrich Nietzsche bought a typewriter—a Malling-Hansen Writing Ball, to be precise. His vision was failing, and keeping his eyes focused on a page had become exhausting and painful, often bringing on crushing headaches. He had been forced to curtail his writing, and he feared that he would soon have to give it up. The typewriter rescued him, at least for a time. Once he had mastered touch-typing, he was able to write with his eyes closed, using only the tips of his fingers. Words could once again flow from his mind to the page.
But the machine had a subtler effect on his work. One of Nietzsche’s friends, a composer, noticed a change in the style of his writing. His already terse prose had become even tighter, more telegraphic. “Perhaps you will through this instrument even take to a new idiom,” the friend wrote in a letter, noting that, in his own work, his “‘thoughts’ in music and language often depend on the quality of pen and paper.”
“You are right,” Nietzsche replied, “our writing equipment takes part in the forming of our thoughts.” Under the sway of the machine, writes the German media scholar Friedrich A. Kittler , Nietzsche’s prose “changed from arguments to aphorisms, from thoughts to puns, from rhetoric to telegram style.”
The human brain is almost infinitely malleable. People used to think that our mental meshwork, the dense connections formed among the 100 billion or so neurons inside our skulls, was largely fixed by the time we reached adulthood. But brain researchers have discovered that that’s not the case. James Olds, a professor of neuroscience who directs the Krasnow Institute for Advanced Study at George Mason University, says that even the adult mind “is very plastic.” Nerve cells routinely break old connections and form new ones. “The brain,” according to Olds, “has the ability to reprogram itself on the fly, altering the way it functions.”
As we use what the sociologist Daniel Bell has called our “intellectual technologies”—the tools that extend our mental rather than our physical capacities—we inevitably begin to take on the qualities of those technologies. The mechanical clock, which came into common use in the 14th century, provides a compelling example. In Technics and Civilization, the historian and cultural critic Lewis Mumford  described how the clock “disassociated time from human events and helped create the belief in an independent world of mathematically measurable sequences.” The “abstract framework of divided time” became “the point of reference for both action and thought.”
The clock’s methodical ticking helped bring into being the scientific mind and the scientific man. But it also took something away. As the late MIT computer scientist Joseph Weizenbaum  observed in his 1976 book, Computer Power and Human Reason: From Judgment to Calculation, the conception of the world that emerged from the widespread use of timekeeping instruments “remains an impoverished version of the older one, for it rests on a rejection of those direct experiences that formed the basis for, and indeed constituted, the old reality.” In deciding when to eat, to work, to sleep, to rise, we stopped listening to our senses and started obeying the clock.
The process of adapting to new intellectual technologies is reflected in the changing metaphors we use to explain ourselves to ourselves. When the mechanical clock arrived, people began thinking of their brains as operating “like clockwork.” Today, in the age of software, we have come to think of them as operating “like computers.” But the changes, neuroscience tells us, go much deeper than metaphor. Thanks to our brain’s plasticity, the adaptation occurs also at a biological level.
The Internet promises to have particularly far-reaching effects on cognition. In a paper published in 1936, the British mathematician Alan Turing  proved that a digital computer, which at the time existed only as a theoretical machine, could be programmed to perform the function of any other information-processing device. And that’s what we’re seeing today. The Internet, an immeasurably powerful computing system, is subsuming most of our other intellectual technologies. It’s becoming our map and our clock, our printing press and our typewriter, our calculator and our telephone, and our radio and TV.
When the Net absorbs a medium, that medium is re-created in the Net’s image. It injects the medium’s content with hyperlinks, blinking ads, and other digital gewgaws, and it surrounds the content with the content of all the other media it has absorbed. A new e-mail message, for instance, may announce its arrival as we’re glancing over the latest headlines at a newspaper’s site. The result is to scatter our attention and diffuse our concentration.
The Net’s influence doesn’t end at the edges of a computer screen, either. As people’s minds become attuned to the crazy quilt of Internet media, traditional media have to adapt to the audience’s new expectations. Television programs add text crawls and pop-up ads, and magazines and newspapers shorten their articles, introduce capsule summaries, and crowd their pages with easy-to-browse info-snippets. When, in March of this year, TheNew York Times decided to devote the second and third pages of every edition to article abstracts , its design director, Tom Bodkin, explained that the “shortcuts” would give harried readers a quick “taste” of the day’s news, sparing them the “less efficient” method of actually turning the pages and reading the articles. Old media have little choice but to play by the new-media rules.
Never has a communications system played so many roles in our lives—or exerted such broad influence over our thoughts—as the Internet does today. Yet, for all that’s been written about the Net, there’s been little consideration of how, exactly, it’s reprogramming us. The Net’s intellectual ethic remains obscure.
About the same time that Nietzsche started using his typewriter, an earnest young man named Frederick Winslow Taylor  carried a stopwatch into the Midvale Steel plant in Philadelphia and began a historic series of experiments aimed at improving the efficiency of the plant’s machinists. With the approval of Midvale’s owners, he recruited a group of factory hands, set them to work on various metalworking machines, and recorded and timed their every movement as well as the operations of the machines. By breaking down every job into a sequence of small, discrete steps and then testing different ways of performing each one, Taylor created a set of precise instructions—an “algorithm,” we might say today—for how each worker should work. Midvale’s employees grumbled about the strict new regime, claiming that it turned them into little more than automatons, but the factory’s productivity soared.
More than a hundred years after the invention of the steam engine, the Industrial Revolution had at last found its philosophy and its philosopher. Taylor’s tight industrial choreography—his “system,” as he liked to call it—was embraced by manufacturers throughout the country and, in time, around the world. Seeking maximum speed, maximum efficiency, and maximum output, factory owners used time-and-motion studies to organize their work and configure the jobs of their workers. The goal, as Taylor defined it in his celebrated 1911 treatise, The Principles of Scientific Management, was to identify and adopt, for every job, the “one best method” of work and thereby to effect “the gradual substitution of science for rule of thumb throughout the mechanic arts.” Once his system was applied to all acts of manual labor, Taylor assured his followers, it would bring about a restructuring not only of industry but of society, creating a utopia of perfect efficiency. “In the past the man has been first,” he declared; “in the future the system must be first.”
Taylor’s system is still very much with us; it remains the ethic of industrial manufacturing. And now, thanks to the growing power that computer engineers and software coders wield over our intellectual lives, Taylor’s ethic is beginning to govern the realm of the mind as well. The Internet is a machine designed for the efficient and automated collection, transmission, and manipulation of information, and its legions of programmers are intent on finding the “one best method”—the perfect algorithm—to carry out every mental movement of what we’ve come to describe as “knowledge work.”
Google’s headquarters, in Mountain View, California—the Googleplex—is the Internet’s high church, and the religion practiced inside its walls is Taylorism. Google, says its chief executive, Eric Schmidt, is “a company that’s founded around the science of measurement,” and it is striving to “systematize everything” it does. Drawing on the terabytes of behavioral data it collects through its search engine and other sites, it carries out thousands of experiments a day, according to the Harvard Business Review, and it uses the results to refine the algorithms that increasingly control how people find information and extract meaning from it. What Taylor did for the work of the hand, Google is doing for the work of the mind.
The company has declared that its mission is “to organize the world’s information and make it universally accessible and useful.” It seeks to develop “the perfect search engine,” which it defines as something that “understands exactly what you mean and gives you back exactly what you want.” In Google’s view, information is a kind of commodity, a utilitarian resource that can be mined and processed with industrial efficiency. The more pieces of information we can “access” and the faster we can extract their gist, the more productive we become as thinkers.
Where does it end? Sergey Brin and Larry Page, the gifted young men who founded Google while pursuing doctoral degrees in computer science at Stanford, speak frequently of their desire to turn their search engine into an artificial intelligence, a HAL-like machine that might be connected directly to our brains. “The ultimate search engine is something as smart as people—or smarter,” Page said in a speech a few years back. “For us, working on search is a way to work on artificial intelligence.” In a 2004 interview with Newsweek, Brin said, “Certainly if you had all the world’s information directly attached to your brain, or an artificial brain that was smarter than your brain, you’d be better off.” Last year, Page told a convention of scientists that Google is “really trying to build artificial intelligence and to do it on a large scale.”
Such an ambition is a natural one, even an admirable one, for a pair of math whizzes with vast quantities of cash at their disposal and a small army of computer scientists in their employ. A fundamentally scientific enterprise, Google is motivated by a desire to use technology, in Eric Schmidt’s words, “to solve problems that have never been solved before,” and artificial intelligence is the hardest problem out there. Why wouldn’t Brin and Page want to be the ones to crack it?
Still, their easy assumption that we’d all “be better off” if our brains were supplemented, or even replaced, by an artificial intelligence is unsettling. It suggests a belief that intelligence is the output of a mechanical process, a series of discrete steps that can be isolated, measured, and optimized. In Google’s world, the world we enter when we go online, there’s little place for the fuzziness of contemplation. Ambiguity is not an opening for insight but a bug to be fixed. The human brain is just an outdated computer that needs a faster processor and a bigger hard drive.
The idea that our minds should operate as high-speed data-processing machines is not only built into the workings of the Internet, it is the network’s reigning business model as well. The faster we surf across the Web—the more links we click and pages we view—the more opportunities Google and other companies gain to collect information about us and to feed us advertisements. Most of the proprietors of the commercial Internet have a financial stake in collecting the crumbs of data we leave behind as we flit from link to link—the more crumbs, the better. The last thing these companies want is to encourage leisurely reading or slow, concentrated thought. It’s in their economic interest to drive us to distraction.
Maybe I’m just a worrywart. Just as there’s a tendency to glorify technological progress, there’s a countertendency to expect the worst of every new tool or machine. In Plato’s Phaedrus, Socrates bemoaned the development of writing. He feared that, as people came to rely on the written word as a substitute for the knowledge they used to carry inside their heads, they would, in the words of one of the dialogue’s characters, “cease to exercise their memory and become forgetful.” And because they would be able to “receive a quantity of information without proper instruction,” they would “be thought very knowledgeable when they are for the most part quite ignorant.” They would be “filled with the conceit of wisdom instead of real wisdom.” Socrates wasn’t wrong—the new technology did often have the effects he feared—but he was shortsighted. He couldn’t foresee the many ways that writing and reading would serve to spread information, spur fresh ideas, and expand human knowledge (if not wisdom).
The arrival of Gutenberg’s printing press, in the 15th century, set off another round of teeth gnashing. The Italian humanist Hieronimo Squarciafico worried that the easy availability of books would lead to intellectual laziness, making men “less studious” and weakening their minds. Others argued that cheaply printed books and broadsheets would undermine religious authority, demean the work of scholars and scribes, and spread sedition and debauchery. As New York University professor Clay Shirky notes, “Most of the arguments made against the printing press were correct, even prescient.” But, again, the doomsayers were unable to imagine the myriad blessings that the printed word would deliver.
So, yes, you should be skeptical of my skepticism. Perhaps those who dismiss critics of the Internet as Luddites or nostalgists will be proved correct, and from our hyperactive, data-stoked minds will spring a golden age of intellectual discovery and universal wisdom. Then again, the Net isn’t the alphabet, and although it may replace the printing press, it produces something altogether different. The kind of deep reading that a sequence of printed pages promotes is valuable not just for the knowledge we acquire from the author’s words but for the intellectual vibrations those words set off within our own minds. In the quiet spaces opened up by the sustained, undistracted reading of a book, or by any other act of contemplation, for that matter, we make our own associations, draw our own inferences and analogies, foster our own ideas. Deep reading, as Maryanne Wolf argues, is indistinguishable from deep thinking.
If we lose those quiet spaces, or fill them up with “content,” we will sacrifice something important not only in our selves but in our culture. In a recent essay, the playwright Richard Foreman  eloquently described what’s at stake:

I come from a tradition of Western culture, in which the ideal (my ideal) was the complex, dense and “cathedral-like” structure of the highly educated and articulate personality—a man or woman who carried inside themselves a personally constructed and unique version of the entire heritage of the West. [But now] I see within us all (myself included) the replacement of complex inner density with a new kind of self—evolving under the pressure of information overload and the technology of the “instantly available.”

As we are drained of our “inner repertory of dense cultural inheritance,” Foreman concluded, we risk turning into “‘pancake people’—spread wide and thin as we connect with that vast network of information accessed by the mere touch of a button.”
I’m haunted by that scene in 2001. What makes it so poignant, and so weird, is the computer’s emotional response to the disassembly of its mind: its despair as one circuit after another goes dark, its childlike pleading with the astronaut—“I can feel it. I can feel it. I’m afraid”—and its final reversion to what can only be called a state of innocence. HAL’s outpouring of feeling contrasts with the emotionlessness that characterizes the human figures in the film, who go about their business with an almost robotic efficiency. Their thoughts and actions feel scripted, as if they’re following the steps of an algorithm. In the world of 2001, people have become so machinelike that the most human character turns out to be a machine. That’s the essence of Kubrick’s dark prophecy: as we come to rely on computers to mediate our understanding of the world, it is our own intelligence that flattens into artificial intelligence.
This article available online at:
http://www.theatlantic.com/magazine/archive/2008/07/is-google-making-us-stupid/6868/